Adjusted Script

We decided to adjust the dialogue section of the script due to the fact it didn't flow as much as we wanted and it seemed a bit forced and clearly scripted. Therefore we added a more casual conversation between the protagonists.

Peer Feedback on the first cut

Title of the opening sequence

Learning Comment:
In this task Imy and I learnt how to add letters on the screen individually, by using keynote. It helped add the effect of the text to look as if it is getting typed with the sound of the typewriter in the background.

First cut of opening sequence

From re watching this Imy and I noticed some errors that we needed to adjust:

- The typography needs to be added and add a typewriting effect to it.

- Some scenes need re shooting such as some areas that were out of focus at 0:42.

- Add a sound of a thud when the protagonist falls to the ground to make it more realistic.

Clarification

We decided to text our main characters to discuss if they are available to reshoot on wednesday for specific areas in our opening sequence.

Feedback

Imy and I created a list of what we needed to improve on and what we needed to reshoot in order to make the opening sequence as smooth and proffesional as ever. This helped us because we had something to follow and we had an ordered plan.

Plan before filming